Score: 0

"tedious"

submission: Mad Quiz

date: October 22, 2008

sry, but im going to have to reiterate some stuff already said here.

first and most importantly it takes so long and there is no way to skip the typing. If you miss a dumb question like whos going to take over the world (its not me?) you have to wait so long to get back to that point to try again. maybe make the next one so that when u click, it displays all the text instead of waiting for it all.

second the grammer of the questions is hideous. "there is 5 apple's..." WHAT? apples isn't possessive so no ' needed, and im guessing since there are 5 apple should be plural which means is should really be are. the question itself is good i think, but its excution is pretty bad.

the execution on a whole suggsts you really just slapped it together with no regard to the actual quality of the gameplay. background is boring, nothing changes, the messages dont change and we have to sit there and watch them even when we know they are going to type the same thing they did last time.

the idea of a quiz game is good, tricky and subtle mind games are, i think, very enjoyable. But if your catering to a crowd who has to be focused on details to finish the game (catching the phrasing and such) then your going to have to use some good grammer and mix things up a bit to keep them interested. You say that you just did this to see peoples reaction, and it seems like (from what i have read) the idea is good but you actually need to work on the next one. I hope to see you come out with a game more enjoyable soon. Good luck to you!

Score: 10

"suprise!"

submission: There She Is!! step4

date: September 6, 2008

This was a really really suprising change to the series, I actually had to go back and watch the whole series from step 1 to make sure I still knew what was going on. I think the most disturbing part is Doki's emotion in this. All through step one and 2 the only emotion was love. Nabi learns to accept this and begins to love as well. Step 3 shows some uncertainty, but they seem determined to survive even if it means meeting in the alley at night. But then step 4 comes and we see our heros fall. I thought the series of Doki (smiling the whole time) getting more and more hurt was an amazing tribute to Doki's persistance and pure love. Perhaps the most touching point is with the little fuzzy guy who tried to protect Doki and dies (i think) as a result. This seems to be what takes Doki over the edge, that and the phone call. Ending on such a sad note we can only hope that Nabi sees the extra plane ticket to paradise.

To all of SamBakZa, you have been excellent from step 1, but please end this story on a good note. There are too many stories like this in real life that end in the most terrible and heart-breaking way. On a lighter note everyoen is goin 2 b pound on ur door eager for the next one, so you should totally get that out as soon as possile. thanks sambakza

Score: 10

"well done"

submission: There She Is!! step3

date: June 25, 2008

nice to see a fantastic yet clean video taking first place. Well done, the animation is diffrent but refreshing, the music selection an interesting choice, but fitting, and the story line solid with some humor thrown in
5/5, 10/10
well done

Score: 9

"good"

submission: Animals

date: October 7, 2007

lighting and graphics reminded me of citizen kane, one of the greatest moveis of all time. Im not sure i fully understand the meaning, but it appears as tho you tried to make it very confusing, perhaps making it relate to more people, allowing them to fill in their experiences and ideas for what this purposely showed little of. good job

Score: 9

"awesome"

submission: The Intruder!

date: October 3, 2007

best stick animation ive seen in a while as many have already said. I love the dead bodies all over the ground. great use of music, made it all flow. Wonderful ending. Simultaneous action forced me to watch it three times so i could watch everything. all in all an A+. (9 only because i dont like to give out 10s unless it leaves the viewer with something to continue with, but with a stick animation thats kinda rough)

Score: 5

"not bad"

submission: Turtle Park Massacre

date: October 3, 2007

i think every1s on ur case a little too mcuh. Admittidly u might have gone overboard on the father, but hey, first animation, its all good. It didnt really have a point tho, there wasnt much of a story which is the biggest letdown i think. music was very good, tho as well as the voiceovers.

plots are good tho man ^^

Score: 10

"beautiful"

submission: :the Composer:

date: September 25, 2007

absolutly wonderful. A nice change from normal newgrounds suff. Thankyou

Score: 9

"lolz"

submission: Kitchen Knife Action 2

date: September 21, 2007

aha i like it. Kitchen utensils dying is always strangely sastisfying. lol the music mixed nicely, kinda ended abruptly but still a good ol' flash